December 08, 2008


Itís no use showing me poems about music;
Iím tone deaf.

Thereís nothing wrong with that one,
just needs more brilliance.

Yeah, youíve written a shocker there.

Having died you never completely come back.
I had a rehearsal for the big stage.

Great poem. And full of love.

*          Donít use tired images when you feel
            you are at a crucial point.

Donít crowd the idea. Have confidence
the point is made and

ask yourself
has this poem got hungry pockets?

—Paul Mitchell

Posted by dwaber at December 8, 2008 02:22 PM